tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post8397196865952513675..comments2023-09-29T00:28:04.208-07:00Comments on The Norman Five: Week 4 Saturday CentusTheNormanFivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00630174485887481773noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-49897192330450273142010-06-01T19:35:01.492-07:002010-06-01T19:35:01.492-07:00Beautifully written, I can see the room and feel t...Beautifully written, I can see the room and feel the heartbreak. Wonderful story! KathyKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-24415350879108398522010-05-31T11:48:01.548-07:002010-05-31T11:48:01.548-07:00Its a really good storyIts a really good storyCaroljshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07754049247944556846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-33417692766300399272010-05-31T10:36:40.765-07:002010-05-31T10:36:40.765-07:00Oh, I loved this story. Although I want to know ...Oh, I loved this story. Although I want to know what happens next.<br /><br />I can feel her sadness...and confusion.<br /><br />Really neat use of the prompt.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-12633766224499685732010-05-31T06:28:31.558-07:002010-05-31T06:28:31.558-07:00I could feel her pain and her shame. Nicely done.I could feel her pain and her shame. Nicely done.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-29199369508582837412010-05-30T15:11:53.728-07:002010-05-30T15:11:53.728-07:00Really great job! I felt as though I was transpor...Really great job! I felt as though I was transported to the reception by your words. A wonderfully sad and tragic story but so well-written!Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-41696289599111741512010-05-30T13:36:25.088-07:002010-05-30T13:36:25.088-07:00I agree...wonderful descriptions! And wow...I don&...I agree...wonderful descriptions! And wow...I don't just want to know more, I NEED to know more....Who? Why? Etc...!! Loved it!BECKYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15184458949017900541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-5516416298748400232010-05-30T03:42:50.449-07:002010-05-30T03:42:50.449-07:00I was drawn in by the description of wedding festi...I was drawn in by the description of wedding festivities and then brought up short by the end. Delightful!People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-8603480150453176142010-05-30T01:38:03.128-07:002010-05-30T01:38:03.128-07:00Oh how sad! Beautiful!Oh how sad! Beautiful!jfb57https://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-88972242575200709142010-05-30T01:07:51.548-07:002010-05-30T01:07:51.548-07:00Brilliantly written - hope you get a chance to sha...Brilliantly written - hope you get a chance to share more!easternsparklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655745434901079268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-87286589681838739002010-05-29T21:39:25.152-07:002010-05-29T21:39:25.152-07:00oh sad, nervous - well written I need more...oh sad, nervous - well written I need more...Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-69830158459696692822010-05-29T11:55:35.855-07:002010-05-29T11:55:35.855-07:00Oh, what a lovely descriptive post. I could just ...Oh, what a lovely descriptive post. I could just see her there with a broken heart. Great job!!Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-49420932915944252882010-05-29T11:50:32.926-07:002010-05-29T11:50:32.926-07:00Even through the writer's pain, she paints a l...Even through the writer's pain, she paints a lovely visual for us readers, all the while breaking our hearts. I like your writing!cj Schlottmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217936774632262633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676630360614717686.post-54057988922041385652010-05-29T11:26:34.986-07:002010-05-29T11:26:34.986-07:00A love lost...a dad missing...perhaps it will all ...A love lost...a dad missing...perhaps it will all get better from here...wonderful story...Peace and blessingsjeff campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17775235800381700596noreply@blogger.com