As a writing teacher, this should be fun.... (I'm a 4th grade writing teacher.. so I have to get out of that young way of thinking mode)
This post is linked to Saturday Centus Week 2. A 100 word story based on a prompt. The prompt is in bold below.
The small Cessna 172 picked up speed as it roared down the runway, Sara at the controls, the flight instructor beside her.
Her heart was pounding, and her hands were unsteady. Why was she doing this? She had nothing to prove. But in the back of her mind, she could only think of one thing... Noah.
He had been on her mind ever since he left for that small town in Alaska. Her heart had been broken. She needed an excuse of why she was following him. How to get close to him without him knowing that she was madly in love with him.
So here she was, as she closed her eyes and pulled back on the controls to take flight.
8 comments:
Definitely not a 4th grade story! Great job!!
Oh, I liked it. I want to her more. Great job.
EXCELLENT! Left me wondering what comes next....
oh, I want to meet Noah. Great story...
Yes, makes you wonder how it will all end...
Woohoo! A romance chase!! Awesome job, hope she finds the guy she's looking for...
I love a good romance that leaves me wanting more.
Thanks for dropping by and giving your feedback on the bees. I've entered one in each of two contests. We'll see how it goes.
I loved this! What a cool teacher you must be...well, not that you share tales of romance but your imagination seems so inspiring!
This was a great story.
And thanks for participating in the meme. It is fun to find new "voices" to read!
Sometime if you're bored please come and read my Story-Time Tuesday. It's an ongoing story...but it's long so not always quick!
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